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ok yeah right now all i want to here is constructive criticism. i know i have some grammar problems but i want to here about the story and stuff. i want to know after reading it would you want to read more.Chapter 1: Open RoadI was sitting in the back seat of my brother Jason’s black 1972 Dodge Challenge, gazing out of the open window snug warn under a nice brown quilt. It was silent and my brother Jason as usual was driving he never lets Sean or me drive, and Sean was snoring quietly to himself in the passengers seat. I kept thinking about my past, it wasn’t a very pleasant one both my parents are dead. They were killed when I was a little girl. I was raised by my uncle he is a hunter (a.k.a someone who slays evil creatures!) he trained me and my brothers how to hunt. He always used to say to us “ a great hunter isn't someone with a personal armory in their trunk: its the person with a well-developed, well-read and researched mind. The best weapon ever is the one sitting behind your eyes.” He was right a hunter like that will survive but I always carry a knife on me just in case, my brother Sean and Jason carry guns no matter what. Anyway we went separate ways awhile ago and now me and my brothers been traveling around the How To Stop Someone From snoring U.S. hunting ghosts, demons, vampires, werewolves, and what ever else goes bump in the night. It is a really hard life but it is my life and I wouldn’t change it for the world. I removed the quilt from my arms and bent down to pick up my dark blue backpack. I un-zipped the bag and started to dig through in it, it was full of clothes, my laptop and my black leather book. That book is my life it has ever thing about me all the hunts I’ve been on, Newspaper clippings, pictures of my mom, dad, and family. Not to mention I a few notes and poems! I finally found what I was looking for, it was my cell phone I slid it opened and looked at my text messages. There was only one new message, I clicked on it and read it to myself!Hey Emma miss u!!- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - From: Penn W.Penn was one of my oldest and best friends. Him and his mother our hunters as well, Penn and me keep in touch by phone texting each when ever we get a chance. They own a hunter’s bar down in Illinois it pretty nice lots of hunters go there, to talk about hunts they been on and secrets. I hit reply on my phone and started wrighting.Miss you 2 call me next time!!-------------------------------------RE: Emma P. I hit send on my phone then slid it close, I put it in my bag and zippered it back up. Then Jason finally broke the long silence that had been going on for about nine miles straight. “who did you just text?” Jason said is eyes still locked on the road.“Penn why do you care anyway?!?” I said pushing the bag to the flour of the car. I kept staring at the back of Jason’s head his hair is a dark brown that kind of looked black in the right sunlight. His hair has always been spiked up no matter how old he got that was his hair style. His dark brown eyes were still locked on the road while he answered.“ just curios don’t have to get all snippy on me!” “ what ever!” I said rubbing my stomach. “Just when are we going to get something to eat I’m starving!” “there’s supposed to be a gas station a couple of miles down we’ll stop there.” Jason said eyes still locked on the road. I looked outside the window again it was just another highway an old one probably not used much. I looked up at the trees they were just blurring by as we past them. I turned my head back to the front seat of the car Jason was fiddling with the radio looking for a decent song. When Jason finally found a song that he liked, he started sing with the lyrics of AC/DC -Black in Black he turned up the volume which woke up Sean.
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